Inspiration of the Week: Tribe by Sebastian Junger

Humans don’t mind hardship, in fact they thrive on it; what they mind is not feeling necessary. Modern society has perfected the art of making people not feel necessary.
— From the introduction to Tribe: On Homecoming and Belonging by Sebastian Junger

I write about soldiers and warriors, their families, wartime situations, clashing nations. Over the years, research has taken me down many philosophical and psychological roads in my attempt to get inside the minds of my characters. But never has a book affected my view of a subject so drastically so quickly.

Sebastian Junger’s short work was a game changer for me.

It’s a simple premise: soldiers returning from war zones attempting to reintegrate into “normal” society—as riddled with issues as they might be—are not the problem. Modern society is the problem.

...self determination theory...holds that human beings need three basic things in order to be content: they need to feel competent at what they do; they need to feel authentic in their lives; and they need to feel connected to others.
— Tribe (page 22)


Cautioning us against the impulse to romanticize past tribal cultures, who “waged war against their neighbors” and practiced “deeply sickening forms of torture,” Junger nonetheless compares our modern hustle to the trials and hardships of tribal life and questions our longstanding beliefs that modern society is uniformly better.


...A person living in a modern city or a suburb can, for the first time in history, go through an entire day—or an entire life—mostly encountering complete strangers. They can be surrounded by others and yet feel deeply, dangerously alone...

...Humans have dragged a body with a long hominid history into an overfed, malnourished, sedentary, sunlight-deficient, sleep-deprived, competitive, inequitable, and socially-isolating environment with dire consequences.
— Tribe -- The Men and the Dogs

Soldiers returning from battle often have experienced the closest modern society comes to living within a tribal unit. During their deployments, at the most heated of times, their individual contributions are necessary for the survival of the whole. Their conduct has a direct effect on the lives of other men and women who live in close proximity for long periods of time, i.e. their behavior affects people who are not strangers. The burden of hardships and dangers and tragedies are carried by the group and the group members form a common understanding.

Then these soldiers return to a society that can’t relate. The average civilian can’t accurately image the violence, depravity, and basic discomfort of living within a war zone. We also can’t imagine the cohesive bonds or the uncomplicated sense of immediate purpose. Our lack of understanding the positives—as much if not more than the negatives—of serving within conflict, can contribute to the soldier’s strong sense of isolation.

This simple but profound (for me) idea has already had an effect on my writing. It might take years for me to fully explore the ramifications for my relationships with the soldiers in my life.

It’s not my intention to get into the book review game, but Tribe can be finished in an evening and is well worth the time.

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The Doodle Experiment Continues (Doodle #2)

Four days of a set writing schedule. Am I making forward progress on The Stone Eagle? Who knows?

But I completed a second doodle drawing along with a few sketches.

 PK Doodle #2 - Anyone want to tell me what they see?

PK Doodle #2 - Anyone want to tell me what they see?

The advice in the doodle video (Peter Draws) was to start with a random few marks and let your mind (and pen) fill in what it wants. Sometimes it turns into something, sometimes not.

Anyone want to tell me what they see?

A Lesson from the Classic Western

All America lies at the end of the wilderness road, and our past is not a dead past, but still lives in us. Our forefathers had civilization inside themselves, the wild outside. We live in the civilization they created, but within us the wilderness still lingers. What they dreamed, we live, and what they lived, we dream. 
— T.K. Whipple, Study out the Land

I found this quote in the introduction to Larry McMurtry's Lonesome Dove.

Funny enough, it never occurred to me to look to the classic western for inspiration, but there it is. The Stone Eagle Series is frontier fiction--traditional values/lifestyles clashing with modernization in a lawless land.

It shouldn't have been a surprise. 

There are horses and "shoot-outs" (albeit with swords and bows and arrows); weak struggling against strong; make-shift systems of trade; and, above all, a question. What does it mean to live with honor?

T.K. Whipple's quote refers to the American West, but could apply to any time or place in history where men, women and children existed on the edge of the civilized world. All of the past, from all corners of the world, live within us. Our dream of the wilderness began in the first seconds of time, and continues on...  


My Brother's Book Just Went Live on Amazon!!

Way to go, Jase!

As of today, The Dublin Hit (Book 1 of the Sauwa Catcher Series) is for sale on Amazon. Isn't the cover stunning? A big thanks to the talented Louis Rakovich at Indigo Forest Designs. 

The notorious Angel of Death is now a gun for hire...

It’s 1994. The Apartheid in South Africa has abruptly collapsed. Covert operations specialist, Sauwa Catcher — once a reluctant but lethal soldier in the fallen regime — finds herself without a country. Branded an international criminal and targeted by multiple intelligence services, Sauwa is a fugitive, alone and on the run. 

An Irish paramilitary organization offers her a deal: carry out a dangerous, hands-on assignment in exchange for money and the means to disappear. 

On the gray streets of Dublin, she plots what she hopes will be her last mission while evading ruthless IRA hitmen, who will stop at nothing to see her dead, and intelligence agencies intent on publicly trying her for the crimes of a corrupt regime. 

Sauwa must use her combat-hardened operational skills and razor-sharp instincts if she is to fight and survive in her shadow world.

Teen Goth Barbarians vs the Late Roman Empire

After three years of writing and talking and sharing stories around a kitchen table, The Stone Eagle: Episode I -- my YA Historical Action Adventure Series -- is days away from publication. Look for the ebook to go on sale on Amazon, iBooks, B&N's Nook, Kobo and others on 10/5/17. A print edition will be available within the next two weeks.

For those of you who have read early drafts, critiqued and given encouragement, thank you. 

Oh, and for a certain nameless reader, this is what a spatha looks like:



A long sword from the Late Roman Empire. The blade measured around 30", allowing greater reach than the traditional gladius, as the legions began to rely more heavily on cavalry.

(Art by PK)